Some kinds of natural disasters have been impacting the world for years. For example, eathquake, one of the most destructive natural disasters has caused too many peoples’ death for years.
However, not only earthquake has caused it but also peoples’ mistakes have contributed to these deaths, too. Because whenever an earthquake comes about we see that the buildings always lack of cement or iron or such like. So we should take serious precations to prevent peoples’ deaths before an earthquake happens another natural disaster is flood. It advents when it rains too much and is as effective as an earthquake and causes many peoples’ deaths, too. Again peoples’ faults have a great role in death and underground works so this increases deaths, too.
In conclusion, natural disasters and people faults have caused many deaths for years and so serious precautions must be taken to prevent this. Also, buildings must be built tactly and underground works must be carried out continously and regularly.
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Hi mehmet fatih,
YanıtlaSilYour organization is good but your writing should include description.There is a mistake.You should write " people's" instead of " peoples’ ".OK.THANKS for writing..see you
Mehmet Fatih,
YanıtlaSilWrite your own descriptive essay on a person, a place or anything. The following is not about description of earthuakes but it is about causes&results of earthquakes. So try another one.
NATURAL DISASTERS AND PEOPLES’ CONTRIBUTION TO THEM (descriptive)
Some kinds of natural disasters have been impacting the world for years. For example, eathquake, one of the most destructive natural disasters has caused too many peoples’ death for years.
However, not only earthquake has caused it but also peoples’ mistakes have contributed to these deaths, too. Because whenever an earthquake comes about we see that the buildings always lack of cement or iron or such like. So we should take serious precations to prevent peoples’ deaths before an earthquake happens another natural disaster is flood. It advents when it rains too much and is as effective as an earthquake and causes many peoples’ deaths, too. Again peoples’ faults have a great role in death and underground works so this increases deaths, too.
In conclusion, natural disasters and people faults have caused many deaths for years and so serious precautions must be taken to prevent this. Also, buildings must be built tactly and underground works must be carried out continously and regularly.
I aggree with our professor:)
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