Cancer is one of the most lethal ilnesses which has killed many people and continued to kill for years.however,altough it has killed people it doesn’t emerge suddenly because somethings cause its emergence like irregular nourishment and not exercising.well,how can we avoid from this malignant disease?
We can say a lot of things to avoid it but there are some major points which can prevent its coming into being.for example,doing exercises regularly which hold the body strong or to care what we eat which keep the body healtly can prevent its advention.
In conclusion,cancer is a fatal disease that causes peoples’ death but there are some important solutions for avoiding from it as ı said…
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hi mehmet fatih,
YanıtlaSilI think canser is very important subject.Your essay subject is good but your essay is short.Your essay is like short essay so you can write more about this subject.I like your essay because canser is big promlem for all and we need some information about this.thank you for this nice writing.
mehmet fatih,your essay is very short and there are some grammar mistakes such as somethings.In thesis statement ,there are two causes,but you tell about these causes in only one paragraph.
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